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Friday, May 22, 2020

TuhiThui

New York is falling! The words rang in Jim’s head. They were the last words to crackle out of the radio before it stopped broadcasting. That had been three days ago. Jim had not heard any words since then.. The next day later jim was preparing for war he need to find a gun like a ak47 so if something wanted to capture him he would be ready 2 minutes later people came knocking on the steel door jim went on the security camera and saw armed people then fake swat ram the door down so I called my friend to see if he could help me but then the call got blocked so jim had no choice to have to shot them they broke in then said we can do this the easy way or the hard way and jim said the hard way ha what a joke come on then but they didn’t know that he set up a trap all over the house then bang bang bang the first trap went off then they paid close attention around the house so jim new they would find out so he but fake trap wicht the fake swat would fall for it well he had the time he jumped out of the window and set up a fake robot of him that looked just like him. He ran to the center of town and found the stores wear ripped apart but still good food inside I was hungry so I had a feed yum all done then I saw rubbish and then I saw someone hiding in the back of the shop and he was my friend I couldn’t call him so I said “hi Kahu” “hi Taimana why do you have 18 guns” “for war” “ok” so I gave him 9 guns with all the ammo in the world. So we walked out the smash boom the statue of Liberty the head rolled off the hill and almost killed us and crash all the cars on the road gone so we knew New York well end soon then we saw the fake swat driving then crash the swat crashed into each other so we had the percifed time to shoot them when they get out of the swat car then they somehow got out quick and then they pulled their guns out and said how shoot us then his teammate said “we crashed into are cars and it hurt”. I was so nervous to be walking around in the open so I said to Kahu”stay in the shadow” “ok” so we were walking down the road going back to my house then we saw so much fake swat so we had to go to kahu place and stay there until this was over. Finally we got home and we watch tv for a long time then Kahu tv glitch and then the same people showed up on the tv “we know there are people still alive so we will not leave until we find you 1 year we will leave bye” ok we had to be more and more ready we knew that they would break down every door they would not stop until 1 year. Big preparation was engaged so we set traps all over the house and the neighbourhood we were in we thought we were going to lose but they came breaking down the house we were in and all the trap were set so we started to `shoot them and done we took out the first group then we reset the trap in the house and then group two came. We made it harder and harder so they careful walked in and saw all the dead body on the ground and we placed fake traps so when they shoot the fake trap it would set the first real one then boom bing paw butter pop paw “ohhhhhhhhh” they scream like little girl’s “ahhhhhhhhh ok we now your here so come out come wherever you are……… We knew are live’s were over until I found a window with a ladder that goes to the ground yes the best getaway in forever then they walked into the bathroom and said “we got you conned “ then they broke the bathroom door then looked everywhere around the house but there was another trap in the bathroom then all the fake swat came and broke into the bathroom then boom bam bop bada boom paw “ohhhhhhh” then we won the war but i'm going to leave the town

1 comment:

  1. WOW Taimana.
    What a great imaginative piece of writing.You have got some very interesting things happening.
    Maybe next time,you could write a shorter story and concentrate on using punctuation.It is always great to show a lot of work but to have a short piece,with correct spelling,full stops and speech marks in the right place,will make your story neater and easier to read.
    Well done for sharing your blog.

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